Some language effects used in oral transactional text and speeches. Some of these appear in poetic texts also.
Rhetorical means language and effects used to impress or persuade the audience.
A question asked for effect, but not necessarily needing to be answered.
Example: Are we going to put up with curfews and being hassled by the police up town? Who cares? Do you think it is right? I don’t. How do you stay healthy on a diet of chips and chocolate?
Trying to impress or influence by overstating a viewpoint, statement or idea.
Example: Millions of students all over the world go home and rush eagerly into their homework in order to secure their future.
As above, but understating a viewpoint for effect.
Example: a few students will wander home and perhaps turn on television.
When two opposite viewpoint, ideas or concepts are placed close to each other for effect.
Example: the two examples above could be an example of contrast if put together. Or let us break the chains, shackles and nightmare of slavery and embrace each other in the dream of freedom.
Quotations from well-known sources:
Such as the Bible, television, movies, proverbs and quotations of famous poets and writers of history, can be used in writings.
Example: turn the other cheek, an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth, yabba dabba dooo, eat my shorts, it’s moments like these… …, make my day; I’ll be back!, a stitch in time saves nine, a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush straight from the horse’s mouth.
“Conscious use of personal pronouns”
As speakers we want to make our audience agree with us in our viewpoints and be against things we are against. The deliberate uses of including or excluding pronouns help speakers do this.
Pronouns to address the audience:
Basically to address them as a group, but not necessarily to persuade them at this stage.
Example: you are here tonight to witness the finals of the speech contest, where your sons and daughters face up to a great challenge.
Pronouns to include the audience:
Speakers want the audience to be on their side and agree with their statements/ideas.
Example: we came here tonight to choose our town symbol. We don’t want a clock- Alexander has a clock. We don’t want a humungus trout as our symbol-Rakaia and Turangi have megatrouts. Let us choose our White horse- it’s ours and always will be.
Pronouns to exclude the audience or to distance the audience:
Sometimes we want to distance the audience from those who have differing arguments.
Example: so our elders want a curfew in Waimate. They it is a good idea to have a curfew of 8 o’clock on a school night for people of our age. Let them have a curfew of 8 o’clock so that they can be out of the pubs and clubs and home with their families as well. They cause more harm in society than teenagers do.
Similar in effect to use of pronouns, choice of words packed with emotion can influence an audience for or against your ideas, to be with you or against you.
Words with positive connotation:
Warm fuzzy words that help to get the audience on your side.
Example: imagine the perfect scene, not a care in the world, waling down the street hand in hand with your adoring parents… they stop and buy you a $1.50 triple scoop choc dipped ice-cream…
Words with negative connotation:
These weasel words have the opposite effect to positively charge emotive words.
Example: from a distance you see them appear, dressed in black, hair like knotted liquor ice. Their top lips quiver and sneer in unison like Elvis with a toothache. They see you and appear to scowl and grunt at each other and point at you accusingly.
Similar to exaggeration and understatement close together, +ve and –ve words in close proximity can highlight and improve the effectiveness of your ideas.
Example: your ‘nice’ day is now ruined. The triple scoop ice-cream melts them then drips all over your black jersey and up your sleeve. You try sneering like the black-uniformed teenagers in front of you, but your lips are numb from the “ice-cream treat”, but what tops it off your parents say to you in their loudest voice “Aren’t you going to introduce us to your friends dear?” you look around for the nearest manhole cover and hope you can prise it open with sticky, ice-cream covered fingers.
“Some language effects used in oral & written transaction texts and speeches, some of these appear in poetic texts also”
Speeches are normally only meant to be heard once, so the speaker normally tries to make main ideas, keywords and phrases memorable using sound effects and devices.
Repeating the initial consonant of group of words for aural effect and memorable.
Example: we’ve all heard of Richie Rich, Daffy Duck, Fred Flinstone, Sylvester Stallone and Morris Minor, but the latest and nastiest alliterative villain to slam our screens-a cartoon nasty that leaves Lex Luthor and Dick Dastardly in his dust is Vicious vinnie.
Repeating vowel sounds for aural effect
Example: laugh, laugh, cackle and guffaw.
Where the words used sounds like the thing or concept being described
Wind swishing or moaning in the treetops
Frost crunching underfoot
Cock a doodle doo woof woof
Words sounding similar that are pleasant to the ear… they also appeal because the listener can almost predict a part of the speech.
Example: chocolate chips, greasy dips and dairy whips, these are the foods that little teenager are made of.
Language that creates a picture in the mind of the listener can assist in the interest level of speech. The listener visualizes or imagines figures, images and comparisons.
Describing two unrelated things using direct comparison. Sometimes the metaphor can be drawn out and becomes an Extended Metaphor.
… … her gaze was icy…
… The salesman was a shark…
The whole sorry incident left a sour taste for every one concerned.
Politicians should darn the holes in the ragged economy before we all start to feel the cold.
Describing two unrelated things or ideas using the linkers “Like” or “As”
1. My love is like a red, red rose that’s newly sprung in June, my love is like a melody that’s sweetly played in tune.
2. as fast as leopard, as good as gold, as thick as a brick, as sharp as a tack, as silly as a two bob watch, as crook as a dog, like a rat up a drainpipe, like bees around a honey pot.
Giving human qualities to non human inanimate things.
- The New Zealand Dollar had a quite week
- life dealt him a heavy blow
- clouds passed sorrowfully over the graveyard
“Other oratorical devices”
These are some other devices which help to make speeches more interesting, vibrant and memorable.
Hammer home a point and make it memorable using repetition
Example: Trust is an important concept in society. If you can’t trust friends not to blab your secrets all over school, if you can’t trust teachers not to blast you for something that he or she let someone away with yesterday, if parents can’t trust you enough to let you borrow the car-how can you survive in the modern world?
This is like repetition, except that phrases and groups of words are repeated for effect.
Example: I have a dream. I have a dream that the sons and daughters of former slaves and the sons and daughters of former slave owners will sit down at the table of brotherhood.
We shall fight them on the beaches; we shall fight them on land and in the air.
In order to emphasis important points lists are often use.
1. Instead of: this school rule change affects all students, say this new school rule change affect from 1’s ; from 2’s ; from 3’s ; from 4’s ; from 5’s ; from 6’s ; even from 7’s.
2. instead of saying a superannuation law change affects everyone say: this law change will impact on town people and country people; rich people and poor people, Maori, pacific islander, Asian and European; employed and unemployed alike.
By: Aqsa Riaz